Anorak Poster Design! (FAIL!)

So, my original idea to use images of dogs in cute hats didn't really work out how I hoped, as you can see below, the illustrations though sweet don't really convey that sense of winter or 'happy' that the magazine is aiming for.

So this was what I was going for, it's uncompleted as you can see, this is definitely a " What was I thinking?" piece, maybe I just had such an urge to draw dogs in hats I got a bit carried away and lots the idea and feel behind what the magazine wants!